Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, June 1, 2016

How to look after a broken collarbone

How to look after a broken collarbone.
Have you ever had a broken collarbone?
A collarbone is also called the clavicle that is the fancy name for it. Did you know that the collarbone is the only bone that is connected to your arm excpect if it’s muscle. Also did you know you can’t have a cast on your broken collarbone because it will hurt your broken collarbone.

Things you need for a broken collarbone
  • A sling
  • Someone willing to help you for the first couple of days until you get used to it
  • A patient patient

  1. Go to the doctors to get an x-ray to see what it looks like. If  the x-ray shows it broken this is what you do.
  2. Hold your arm very still and a doctor will give you a sling.
  3. Take some Pamol to stop it from hurting so bad.
  4. Use the arm that you didn’t break.
  5. Wait about 3 weeks you can sleep with the sling off and at the 4 week mark you can take the sling off for good.
Carefully start to play at the 2 week mark but be warned life has its consequences.

I will show you two photos one is me with a sling on and another of an x-ray of a broken collarbone.
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I'm proud of my self because I persevered when learning got tough.
The thing that challenged me was to get my verbs in.

Wednesday, April 13, 2016

Vocabulary

I have been working on vocabulary word because it was one of my leaning tarsk. I know I have to use clues to work out what words mean. The clues are in the text and sometimes in the word. I lernt that it that every fore(four) years the moon goes in front of the sun making it the not be abale(able) to see earth making the earth dark.
This is my vocabulary
 I have been using vocabulary in my writing as well and that's why I'm showing you my writing.
The Great water slide
I was at the biggest baddest water slide ever and it’s name was the slide of Life and Death. In a normal theme park many people have died on the slide but many have survived.  If you survive you can’t tell the tale of what it was like. It was going to be my turn soon, finally it was my turn I felt so scared I would go back down, but the rules where you can’t go back. Finally it was my turn, nervously shoving myself off I started to zoom down the slide with great speed going faster and faster down the slide. I thought I saw the end of the slide but it was a jump I screamed like a little girl. Thinking that I would die my heart was beating as fast as a cheater I lay down on my back trying to go faster, then I leaped off the air like a hawk soaring through the sky with great speed. Still screaming like a little girl I landed with a thump!. All my screams turned into a very loud ouch! My bottom didn't get hurt because it was two inches thick. You might think it’s the end but it’s not, still on the slide it was time for the two meter drop. With a splash in the shape of a bomb. Hitting the water surface I started to go as fast as I could I swam to the side of the two meter deep pool and I shouted out loud “Again”!

Now I want to share with you five vocabulary words in my writing:Zoom,Soaring,Thump,splash and nervously.


Tuesday, June 16, 2015

Ben 10 - Week 8

Ben 10 is a kid like us but he is a bit different then us because when he was 10 he had to go to a summer camp with his grandpa and his cousin queen.  Ben thought it was going to be the worst summer ever, but one night he came out of the tent that he was sleeping in next to the van.  He saw an asteroid coming down from outer space and Ben followed it and when he saw it, he thought it was a ball, but the ball opened and Ben saw a watch.  The watch jumped on Ben's arm and after that he called it the optometrists, after he got use to it and found out how to work it, he started to save the world.  Here are his aliens that he can turn into from his watch, here they are.







Friday, May 22, 2015

My Lolly for the Grubber Shop - Week 5

My lolly that I thought you might like...
This one is my very favourite one called the Zig Zag Zoomer and it looks like a lightning strike with a death skull going round and round the lolly. 
When you touch it, you get a tazer shock and it makes the sound of thunder.
It costs $10 for a little jar or $20 for a big jar.
You need to have a license to eat them though.
When you eat them you zig zag like crazy, you zig zag as fast as lightning.

Friday, May 15, 2015

The Summarizing Strategy - week 4

We are learning how to summarize in room 12.
Mostly you can find key words in books. 
You can't copy someones work or that is called plagiarism.
Key words can help you make sentences.

These are some keywords:
Charlie, pigeon and race

Here is the sentence:
Charlie is a homing pigeon and is going to his first race of the season racing other pigeons.

Thursday, April 23, 2015

Kiwis - Week 1


Kiwis are native birds that only live in New Zealand.  

Did you know that kiwis have a really small wing? 

Even though they have wings they can’t fly at all.


They have quite a lot of predators like stoats, possums dogs, cats and more.


A kiwi can live at least between 25 to 50 years old.

Monday, April 6, 2015

My Superhero - The lion from the Wizard of Oz

Hi, I am the lion from the wizard of oz and I am here to tell you about me.  I look deadly, furry and strong.
His characteristics are kind, nice and generous. 
His actions are clean, nice and life saving.

Swimming Reflection

My Swimming Reflection-Teague

I learned how to…be swimming and breathe at the same time.

Something I found challenging was…nothing

At the end of the year I would like to improve on…straight arms and diving/


Mrs Miller, Mr Kenny or Mrs Lowe could help me by…teaching me diving and straight arms.

The best part about swimming was… when we got to use the life jackets.

Wednesday, February 25, 2015

Black Shadow

My super heroes name is…Black Shadow and he lives in an underground fortress with his young justice team.  the underground fortress is very clean and tidy with heaps of fighting gadgets.


He looks so cool but he is deadly.  He has a Spiderman mask and he is an archer with bulletproof top and pants with a demon tail and a fiery fist.  He has a belt with a flaming sword.


His characteristics are really nice and he’s way cool and has saved his plants.

His actions are very nice and he will risk his life for another person.